(( A Girl & the war ))

My entire being
is a battleground, in which
the Leper Writers, make their interpretationin the encyclopedia of tumbledown homes.

The newly returned wounded of war,
remove bandages from their bullet-stricken feet.

Boots after boots are being taken off,
announcing their arrivals to families,
so that the long period of anticipation is ended!

Wind is blowing,
and the child,
goes to the father's bedside.

Wind is blowing,
Mother holds the child in her bosom.

Wind is blowing,
but the girl, still young,
is the spectator of a weary horde of soldiers,
carrying the frigidity of her husband's corpse,
through the rushing crowd.

((** Poet: Seyed Morteza Hamidzadeh **))

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Inspiration

Submitted by Domaris on Wed, 03/21/2012 - 20:35.

I loved your poem, its really intense, touching and real.

Congratulations!

Kiss

 

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Inspiration

Submitted by Domaris on Wed, 03/21/2012 - 20:34.

I loved your poem, its really intense, touching and real.

Congratulations!

Kiss

 

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Dear Seyed, Here I am as

Submitted by Mydeepsoul on Wed, 02/22/2012 - 17:57.

Dear Seyed,

Here I am as promised :)
I really enjoyed reading you ... very sad, but intense.

Thanks for your invitation...

See you soon...

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Hello Seyed. Do you know  me?

Submitted by Charles Antônio... on Fri, 05/13/2011 - 21:29.

Hello Seyed. Do you know  me? The man that talk with you in the chat today.

This poem have a modern and very beautiful style. It´s the true.  It's a actual theme.crying

I see outhers poems and it is  very good.

I'm sorry, because i don't speak english fluently. But  my congratulatios!

Bye, Bye.

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