Llamando a mi Romeo-Spanglish poem series

Me occurio a mi
Que esas palabras
I miss,
crecieron in my heart,
como una raiz,
Y llegaron aser
una flor,
pero, rapido
it did die, muy
rapido, se infecto
la raiz with
overwatering
de palabras falsas.

Trate de salvarla
muy tarde,  now
I sit here lonely,
suplicandole a
las estrellas,
to help me,
estan muy lejos,
they can’t hear
me,

Le pido a Diosito,
que oiga, my prayer,
to bring you back
to me, pronto.

 

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What a nice and soft tangle,

What a nice and soft tangle, between "tango" and "Love Story". The two Americas: North and South...
Or "flamengo" and "Love story" from Spain, in Europe..

Tell me, are you from Spain or South America?smiley I just can't figure it out.

You must watch this video from Pablo Alborán and a portuguese fado singer named Carminho:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8EFMojiDY2k&feature=player_embedded

 

 

 

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El video de youtube

Preciosa cancion, me encanto, es una poesia! gracias for sharing this cancion.

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Born in San Juan Puerto Rico,  raised in New York City since the age of three, I'm trying to start my own kind of

poetry a mix of Neoyorican languish. Thanks for stopping by, I will look at the video and give you a remark or twocool

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