Last night I had a dream...

Last night I had a dream

You were there next to me

My hand in your hand, so close

My lips in your lips, so warm

My eyes set in your eyes, so true

 

Last night I had a dream

You were lying there next to me

My heart so peaceful next to yours

Could this feeling be more real?

Could you know better how I feel?

 

Last night I had a dream

You were really there with me

We were happy and could be free

Just you and me waiting for eternity.

But, last night vanished with the morning sun

You were not there to give me your hand

My heart alone in the rising of the dawn

My eyes kept searching for yours, long gone.

 

Elsa Azevedo

 

Submited by

Thursday, January 26, 2012 - 10:30

Poesia :

No votes yet

Elsa Azevedo

Elsa Azevedo's picture
Offline
Title: Membro
Last seen: 2 years 40 weeks ago
Joined: 01/25/2012
Posts:
Points: 230

Comments

Nostalgia's picture

Hello Elsa,What a beautiful

Hello Elsa,

What a beautiful dream you had
It's a pitty it ended so sad.
Tomorrow is another day,
Keep searching, and finding him, you may.

I loved it
Congratulations

 

 

Elsa Azevedo's picture

Thank you so much :)

Tomorrow will certain be a better day :)

:)

apsferreira's picture

You knows they come back,

You knows they come back, tonight...

People must keep themselves always hopeful,

:-)

Add comment

Login to post comments

other contents of Elsa Azevedo

Topic Title Replies Views Last Postsort icon Language
Prosas/Tristeza Carta... 0 1.371 12/13/2021 - 15:37 Portuguese
Poesia/Intervention O mundo que conheço... 0 1.118 04/29/2020 - 14:14 Portuguese
Poesia/Thoughts Voltei a sentir... 0 1.354 03/26/2016 - 22:59 Portuguese
Poesia/Dedicated Sentir... 1 1.426 06/16/2014 - 00:57 Portuguese
Poesia/Friendship Somos nós... 1 1.412 06/10/2014 - 19:50 Portuguese
Poesia/Dedicated Ainda és tu... 0 1.077 03/10/2014 - 11:40 Portuguese
Poesia/Dedicated És tu... 1 1.478 12/02/2013 - 16:43 Portuguese
Prosas/Thoughts Sentada... 1 1.380 07/14/2012 - 18:16 Portuguese
Poesia/Dedicated Sou tua... 0 1.302 07/14/2012 - 17:02 Portuguese
Poesia/Poetrix Keep on Dreaming... 4 2.001 06/14/2012 - 22:37 English
Poesia/Thoughts Desilusão... 1 1.444 06/14/2012 - 22:23 Portuguese
Poesia/Sonnet Dormência... 4 1.713 05/07/2012 - 08:59 Portuguese
Poesia/Thoughts Entender... 1 1.588 04/01/2012 - 15:12 Portuguese
Poesia/Dedicated Se... 3 1.510 03/28/2012 - 17:48 Portuguese
Poesia/Sonnet Sou... 2 1.407 03/24/2012 - 14:18 Portuguese
Prosas/Thoughts Eu e uma folha... 2 1.680 03/21/2012 - 18:44 Portuguese
Poesia/Sonnet O tempo estreita-se... 1 1.466 03/21/2012 - 17:05 Portuguese
Poesia/Thoughts Quem não pensa... 2 1.241 03/07/2012 - 22:18 Portuguese
Poesia/Thoughts Ninguém... 8 1.323 02/29/2012 - 14:36 Portuguese
Poesia/Poetrix Last night I had a dream... 3 1.609 02/29/2012 - 09:20 Portuguese
Prosas/Thoughts O mundo... 4 1.712 02/24/2012 - 22:02 Portuguese
Poesia/Sonnet Águas Mansas... 5 1.772 02/19/2012 - 14:48 Portuguese
Poesia/Dedicated Abraçados... 6 1.518 02/13/2012 - 21:07 Portuguese
Prosas/Thoughts Hoje, Ouvi... 4 1.340 02/06/2012 - 18:19 Portuguese
Poesia/Sonnet Conta-me... 2 1.696 02/06/2012 - 15:09 Portuguese